Where were the old days when people in here used to make poems and poke fun at other people? Then we would criticize and bình luận thơ văn. Aww... those were the golden days of Viet AF chat.

Now, mấy nhà thơ nổi tiếng của Việt AF đâu rồi?

you want poems ey?? ...these are mines...tell me what yall think...all of them won a spot in the books...

A Person's LifeTime
Time is a substance where you can never change
There is only some time that you can almost rearrange
But whenever you think a person's in your mind.
You wish you can go back and fill up the empty line
What if earth rotates in a different way?
Will our life be backwards and time turns gray?
Is there a secret of life, time, and the universe?
Will there be left of any unknown curse?
What will happen, we never know
If time succeeds, our life will grow
Will the world have a new generation?
With life and time of fact and dedication.

Terrible Love Tragedy
Truth lies only on the inside
Things you want to seek, stays low and hide
To love a human-being takes more than just trust
Total interest will collapse as one joins the quest
The thoughts of one kind messes with the other
Time starts to fade as one begins to stutter
Traveling at the depths of your heart's destination
Take one step further to see a romantic creation
Touch the face's last smile; and then it changed
Trying not to cry when frowns are at its range
Tears are only formed when he or she threatens
Treasures that are left behind, will never be forgotten.

Whispers of Your Name
Lacking patterns of the imagery I see
I feel for what is made, instead for what is seen
Exhilarating behaviors that I perhaps perceive
Inspired by your evermore touch, I feel the need
Heaven for whom you are, I trust, I adore
Neglecting is uncertain, I propose to you my heart
Intervened by your tears, let I take that drastic part
Regions which are hidden, bliss once lost, happiness I will restore
Though others try to replicate, you`re the one I`d die for
Least I can do is offer you my companion
I want, I crave, I wish for everything of what was destined

Waiting for You
Waiting all day
Waiting all night
Feeling sunrays
Like you being bright
Time of despair
Time of stress
Acknowledging my fear
With all I can caress
Succeeding my life
Succeeding your heart
Dreaming I thrive
Cherishing you like a work of art.

I Love You
Every meaning of love creates my atmosphere
I love you deeply from which can cause me tears
I always think about you every single day
You make my heart grow stronger, not letting it decay
It feels like I'm attached forever
And I know that we will always be together
I don't want to let you go
Even if one of us cause trouble
I just want to tell you that you are my special baby
...and you will always stay that way.

I Love You - Part II
Imagine all the dreams I've discovered to its resolution
Memories in which we shared will cause no disruption
I cherish you from contained love from my heart
The poem I wrote before defines you as a work of art
I will love you always and will deceive effects of fading
Love makes me feel what you feel, its just simple, loving
Over all the fishes in the sea, there will be only you and I
Venture throughout my whole life hoping you'll never say goodbye
Every time you are away from me, I feel ashamed and worried
Yes, I do feel that way because you are unprotected
One who I adore will take me to a new life
Understanding your features...I await the word wife.

Whoa, I know I can't write that good. But damn! Those poems are good and smooth.

Nice job!

anyone know the famous poet Ho Xuan Huong?

Her poems are good too....well, in what way u look at it really. ^^
it is kinda rude....thats wat makes it good, u hardli hear Viet Rude poems.

Yeah, I think we've posted some of her poems in here, but that was a while ago. And the topics are probably 2-3 months old now.

thanks!